Unfortunately, my group had a few people missing today. That said, I did gain some useful feedback that I plan to incorporate into my paper. Mostly, the feedback had to do with expanding a few specific paragraphs to highlight my thesis and transition smoothly from the first section of my paper, to the second. I completely agree with this suggestion and will try to write a more detailed transitioning paragraph.
The rest of my feedback was positive, so I'm not sure if I gained a whole lot of help from this peer review, but I will try and edit my paper based off of these comments and those left to me on Google Docs.
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